this is a great story; one of my favorites so far. It was such a different kind of story, I didn't know what to expect. Around every paragraph was a connecting brilliant idea. I cannot believe you can come up with something this perfect. An amazing job, keep on writing.
This was a great story. I couldn't stop reading throughout it. You are a great writer and I can tell of good quality, too. I'm usually a person that finds grammar or spelling mistakes in everything, but in your "The Sound" there wasn't a one to spot. Plus everything flowed so well, I felt like I was right there destroying the apartment. This was a great story and hilarious at times, great work.
-ScoobyDoobyDawg
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