Hmm.. Well, it ain't this old country boy's forte, so to speak. But, its defenitly a good story, and has quite a bit of potential. Keep up the good work, darlin'.. If'n I might call you that..
Seriously awesome, my friend. I can't wait for the next chapter. No complaint from me. Not really any advice, either. Although, If you need a suggestion on a sniper rifle, I'd (personnally, this is just me) go with a fifty cal. Barret, or a thirty cal. suppressed semi-auto if you wanna be quiet.
AWESOME!!!!! Kinda wierd, th fact that i just today finished with my own short story, set in '42 on the eastern front. Stalingrad, Russia, to be exact. I can't wait for the rest of it..
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