Very cool and unusual word usage!! I enjoy a poem that I have to read more than once to garner meaning from. This is definitely not your average "roses are red" drivel.I bet things get pretty crowded up there in your mind...keep up the good work and thanks for sharing this!! :)Snake
A cute little love poem...I bet it will mean the world to that special someone.My sense of meter tells me that in some places you have a few too many words...it makes it harder for the poem to FLOW. Of course that is only my opinion. I did enjoy it, thanks for sharing.:)Snake
powerful and insightful poem !! Very clear and concise with cool images like "words as blades". The outrage in your "voice" is clear. perhaps a little too close to prose instead of poetry but I appreciate the effort it took to write this down. Thanks for sharing. :)Snake
Quite a lot of feeling in this one!! I appreciate your emotion. One thing i would like to know (have added to the poem) is exactly what has turned you into what you hate....? A loved one, circumstances, cruel fate, dumb luck??? I think ALL of us are our own worst enemy at times, for various reasons.Thank you for sharing this:)Snake
Quite a logical progression in this work. It is sometimes difficult to flow smoothly with so much information being given, but it is done well here. I personally enjoy more creative word usage in poetry but that can be an issue when telling a story like this. well put together poem, thanks for sharing it !!:)Snake
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