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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Original. Nice short fiction. I like the simplicity of the language, as well as the short descriptions. It reminds me of the old Scary Stories to tell in the Dark series. It's nice that there isn't really a moral; it's just a "this is the way it is" kind of story. The only thing I did not particularly like was the ending. Maybe a punch line or something? It seems that it should be a joke on the part of the corpse or Warren.
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