hi
the poem sounds very realistic. is it a figment of your imagination or is based on reality/experience? anway its a good piece.keep writing. and do check out my port too if you have the time.
hi
That was a good piece of information. I got some tips from that. Here are a few suggestions -
1) You could have given a few more examples in order to represent different moods in a poem.
2 Examples could have been added for poetry devices like enjambement, caesura, oxymoron, metaphor, hyperbole etc. In that way, it would be more easier for budding poets who are not very familiar with the nuances of poetry writing.
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