This is so beautiful! I don't know which I like more, but I love the message. The rhyming and flow are both beautiful, and elegant. I would love to read more of your writings, and I hope they are just as good. Stay inspired as those writings are always best, and just remember to write what you feel.
This is really good. There are many ways this can be interpreted. I personally understand the feelings of the character because I know what they seem to be feeling, as I have felt it for myself. This is a beautiful poem, keep up the good writing. You have a lot of potential.
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