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Review by Wodahs
Rated: E | (3.5)
I appreciate the outline ideas, I have a question though how do i expand my first chapter after i dentifying the hazards and goals my main supporting character doesnt even make an apearence till the second chapter. My supporting character also lacks his own ability to produce dialogue before the 4th chapter any tips?
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