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Review of Just Believe  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
I love this poem. Its good that you keep trying to bring him to Christ, I assume from your description this is is reality, not fiction. The repeating the phrase immediately was different, but I do like the poem.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I liked it. A very good poem. Some of the phrasing was a tad bit confusing. It is a very touching poem. Im not much of a poet, so I think it is amazing that you managed to get it to rhyme so well. And that you got it to flow so smoothly.
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Review of Stay.  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Very powerful, though somewhat sad. Overall pretty good.
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