\"Writing.Com
*Magnify*
SPONSORED LINKS
BY ONLINE AUTHORS
Printed from https://writing.com/main/profile/reviews/slovesdisco
Review Requests: OFF
4 Public Reviews Given
4 Total Reviews Given
Public Reviews
1
1
Review of Pay it forward  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.0)
Chrissie, it's a lovely piece of work because you've filled it with so much heart! There are a few capitalization and comma repairs that take the reader a bit off course but you can clearly see the the writer truly enjoyed penning and that always makes a piece extra special.
2
2
Review of Love's Immorality  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.0)
Heavy thoughts packed tightly, well done.
3
3
Rated: E | (4.5)
It felt finished at the last verse "i sat next to my uncle" It's very whimsical in a twisting way. Clever way to blend dream life with real life ideas and philosophies, it takes a lot of wording loops so maybe one more verse to close it and bring all the colorful ideas into a black and white reality? It's lovely. Well done.
4
4
Review of To My Astronaut  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this, I wrote something with the same theme but yours is much sweeter, softer. well done. Check mine out if you have the time.
4 Reviews · *Magnify*
Page of 1 · 25 per page   < >
Printed from https://writing.com/main/profile/reviews/slovesdisco