Before I begin, I just wanted to say that I can relate to this poem. I always wonder about tomorrow. I know it can't always be perfect, but we have to do our best to make it the best it can be. I used to be reckless and not care, by I learned firsthand that we should. I wasn't a pleasant experience, but now I know how to avoid it.
Anyway, I thought your poem was really good. I don't usually don't like poems, but this one stuck with me.
One of the things I really liked was how you used sensory details. I felt like I was there in the poem because of them.
To be honest, I have nothing bad to say. Great job!
~sjd_write
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