So far so good, I really enjoy the story. One of the things I enjoy most about this story is that it is not the sterotypical witch most people associate with. I am totally unsure what is going to happen next in the story and that is a great thing to have in writing! Another thing I love about your writing is that you are not talking down to the children who may be reading your work! Keep up the great work looking forward to seeing how it ends! :)
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