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I love reading all kinds of written pieces. I'll be honest with my opinion. The soul of any piece is what catches my attention *Smile*
I'm good at...
Poetry!
Favorite Genres
Mystery, romance, suspense drama.
Least Favorite Genres
Horror.
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Rated: E | (2.5)
Hello there!
Sorry for the delay, but I appreciate your request for a review. I'd happily do it for you.

Well, in your first line, instead of choice you could write chosen. In the second last line, I'm not sure whether you mean to right 'hallow'? Cause I couldn't figure out how the meaning fits. Could it be 'hollow'

Overall, I like the way you have expressed 'anxiety'. I liked the first two paragraphs most. Good choice of vocabulary at your level. But you could improve on the flow of your poetry style. It seems a bit broken and distorted. Otherwise nice work if you have just started writing. *Smile*
All the best (y)
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