\"Writing.Com
*Magnify*
SPONSORED LINKS
BY ONLINE AUTHORS
Printed from https://writing.com/main/profile/reviews/sinfulstyle
Review Requests: OFF
2 Public Reviews Given
2 Total Reviews Given
Public Reviews
1
1
Review of Promise Me  Open in new Window.
Review by Sinfulstyle Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow! This blew my mind its so well put together and I can feel the emotion. I've felt this way before, I'm in the military and that's all I really have are dreams half of the year. It's very well put together and rhymes so well. It's amazing. Thank you for this beautiful piece. Write on!
2
2
Review by Sinfulstyle Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Please take this review as a fellow writer and reader not a critic :). I can sense the detachment in the first few lines but to be honest the rest of it kind of loses me. Is the person in a coma? Daydreaming? I'm not quite sure. Maybe it's not meant to be understood? Oh why is there a hyphen after clouds? Keep writing I have a feeling that you have a very amazing imagination and can't wait to read more!
2 Reviews · *Magnify*
Page of 1 · 25 per page   < >
Printed from https://writing.com/main/profile/reviews/sinfulstyle