This is a nice and interesting take on planet WIDE,and cupider is the worst is indeed rare and rather unorthodox. Though you want the reviewer to express a bad impression on this poem. My bad I didn't find any however do write a poem on cupid option and interaction between Jupiter and Saturn. I wonder about the forgotten purse or something more here. All the best for the Bards Hall Contest, I will find rare entries like yours very promising..sindbad
I have written my deep and stirring review of this excellent chapter yesterday and am eager to read enjoy and review more chapter so very well written by your seasoned secured and able hand. What's more the word count never mattered, it's the quality of time spent that has a deeper impact...sindbad
This is a nice and interesting chapter and as a reader I can appreciate lot of graphic content like-Every footfall on his exposed flesh and knobs of bones poking through muscle must have brought about an unimaginable agony. Still, he clawed at himself and carved away chunk after chunk through flank and haunch, exposing here and there the bright white of bone until he'd forced one final, horrific step to the edge of darkness. The black worming tendrils climbed and slithered up through the muscles in his neck and along his cheeks. They gathered about like a whirlpool, sinking into the pits of his eyes. The last remnant of life decayed away from the deep blue of his irises, into milky white clouds as he released a low and long sigh.
There were so many such beautifully written scenario and I can visualise them so clearly in my mind. Always be near the light and the righteous moves are so well explored and highlighted, so overall this chapter ozes with positive vibes and righteous thoughts. Overall a great chapter indeed..sindbad
The sequel you have here is indeed creative and reader gets a whole experience. An experience that is rich with words, imagination, the historical or ancient script and facts, origination of human and their good or bad karma, the heaven the hell or historical entities like Jeremiah. I can continue with all the positive things I can collect from this sequel. Though for readers with second language as English like me will refer to dictionary pretty often to enjoy the actual and hidden meanings so very creatively written here. Great job indeed...sinbad
This is a nice and interesting story with all ingredients of mystery, enigma, paranormal angle and the thing I like the most some unexplained sequence of events that remained a mystery till the end. Though I like Happy endings even if it happens after 20 years, in this story the silver lining for lis remained a mystery till the end. I hope this story is inspired by some true incident. Overal this is a short and very intersting mystery novel with so many things that readers can guess might have happened..sindbad
Blaze of glory is a creative and an interesting novel, and chapter 1 to 5 did give reader idea and basic backround for this action oriented story is worth all time, reader can get to read the full novel. I am indeed intrigued and eager to know the rest of the action that's going to happen. This is a great and wholesome take, wish you all the best and lucky to come across such a interesting story...sibdbad
This is a nice and mind boggling intresting sequel. The story started on a slower note and readers got an inkling that something different is coming across the way. The way the story about the old gypsy lady unfolded. I liked the lines like- Two for joy. Three for a girl. Four for a boy. Five for silver. Six for gold. Seven for a secret, ne'er to be told...I am indeed motivated to write more but something's are savored better than expressing them in the open..sindbad
This is a nice and interesting sequel, like the title the doors to the new begining has been beautifully written with all the creativity and amazing stuff so very much missing in so many storyline I have read and reviewed. This story comes in top and creates a foundation and interest that is unique and will certainly attract tons of reader. I am indeed lucky to come across such creative and bold storyline. Great job indeed..sindbad
This is a nice and creative introduction and as a reader your attitude did stand out in this story like the lines- I know only of what I've been told from my own rituals and knowledge gifted to me by these spirits. I may only say humans were not meant, nor are we capable of understanding the eternity wherein these great and terrible beings dwell...Nature of lemegeton and all the things associated with the rich history with Solomon or Devil and all the unique incidents mentioned did leave a deep impression..sindbad
This is a nice and creative story, a story that tests a readers imagination and unique consequences for the limits placed. Overall the story is high grade and enjoyable as well. Though the language used can be testing for readers with English as their second language. The nuances and effective sub plots are the strength and interesting aspect of this story. So I am lucky indeed to come across such an interesting story here. Great work with lot to learn for an aspiring author as well..sindbad
This is a nice and creative muse with nice and effective dose of lust and visual roleplay. All this and more so very well drafted in lines like - On the other side of the world,
something like disappointment fell from the sky, but the memory
of her orgasm--pure, angelic--called me, hailed me,
as I sleepwalked across concrete dune seas.
Oh, that rain and that polyurethane smile,
sheathed me, made me…perhaps even kept me…safe....Great job indeed with little room for any deviation..sindbad
This is a nice and rather emotional story and as a reader I felt the solidarity and instant rever for the fallen heroes in 9/11. I remember, speaks of volume of things in so few a word, and as a reader this story binds the whole humankind, and such acts of mass destruction. A story like this makes all of us appreciate the solidarity, and the common spirit. A short and great story indeed...sindbad
America is still singing is a catchy and rather easy to read through. Though it is day or night something or the other is continuosly happening like Nathaniel Hawthorne's The Scarlet Letter
Standing on the balcony of a Victorian house,
Or yet in Arthur Miller's The Crucible, living in fear at the height of the Salem Witch Trials
Or Washington Irving's The Legend of Sleepy Hollow,
Riding home from an All Hollow's Eve Party, running from the Headless Horseman
Or even Jules Verne's 20,000 Leagues Under the Sea, standing on the deck of the Nautilus
Next to Captain Nemo himself, looking at the same moon...as a reader we get a wide spectrum of input with so few a word. Great job indeed...sindbad
You have been a famous personality with so very beautiful and heart touching stories mostly dealing with medical profession. Gambling with life is such a poem with perfect and rather creative ending with you left me. All this and more leaves a deep impression...sindbad
This is a nice and educative take on certain aspect of life that deals with our character entitlement and most important our public image. So as a reader this is educative and rich with inspirational quotes and downfall of famous athletes due to their poor personal choice and life. The quote I love the most is -An athlete cannot run with money in his pockets .He must run with hope in his heart and dreams in his head...trust me this quote is true in our day to day life as well. The tips of Pro athletes are penned here by a writer who has experienced all this first hand and need to be taken seriously...sindbad
This is a nice and exciting story, and the suspence with Simon recounting his current situation and what all things he achieved and the judgement day with all the events so very well described by him, including Carol and ger demise. The unopened door exemplifies all the mysteries and excitement one can get in Stephen king's novel. This is a great take with rather unique ending...sindbad
This is a nice story that exemplify the mind games. The way you have written about the kidnapping and the way Rambo handles the situation. All this speaks about so many possibilities. As a reader the plot and the way story unfolds speaks in volume the preparation and homework you did to create such a realistic and interesting story line. Great job indeed..sindbad
This is a nice and creative story, with subtle and strong plot that keeps readers glued till the end. I appreciate the layout and the title starless with some good quotes like-
A woman so pretty, intelligent and rich... you will never find anyone who wants to marry you again” he said.
This is nice and story remained intresting till the end..sindbad
This is nice long and wonderful story. I have my reservations on certain things mentioned, however the structure of the story and the inference we get is worth so much, and I am indeed lucky and happy to go through this wonderful story. Please continue with such creative take and make readers value your imaginations and creativity..sindbad
This is a nice and interesting story with a rather unusual title like beneath the rooftop sky. The story captures some unique hits and misses in love, also some curious angle of events happening between a boy and a young. This is typical and yet intelligent set up of events with some curious and surprising reference to history. The way you managed to create and sustain the interest of the readers is indeed worth appreciating. This is a nice story with some unique reference point to the young generations today...sindbad
This is a nice and a rather romantic story with a unique and rather interesting twist with when one door closes another opens, and even better quote Every man needs two women: a quiet home-maker, and a thrilling nymph. I am indeed lucky and indebted to you to write such a creative story and a perfect title. Great story and an inherent impulse to express my opinion about the same...sindbad
This is a nice and sensitive story that address some very sensitive and practical things that lot of people face and plan according to their environment and events that we all think we have full control and to some extent predictable. Though nature has their curve ball thrown and the way you created a practical and heart touching story. Great job indeed...sindbad
This is a nice and authentic story and interaction between a father and a daughter, all the expectation excitement and dynamism is so very well expressed from the daughter ends, plus the premiumness and pride with a self indignant composure from the father's end is so very well expressed. The story hits hard for a father with a growing up daughter her aspirations, dreams and excitement all comes flooding by. Great job indeed...sindbad
This is a nice and creative story and did leave deep mark, certain words and proverbs are so true that I have written them in my inspirational notebook. The words like - You are like a bird in a cage” she used to say with a sigh “you want to be free, but you are a good man, you’ll never be able to do it”... And rather memorable last words...sindbad
The change is a very creative and worthwhile story we come across after a long reading of so many stories. I am indeed grateful and lucky to come across such story. These 5 days and each events on these days and worth reading. Great story with a nice and creative plot for newbie writers...sindbad.
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