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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Great story I'm already wanting more good story line, well writen and love the POV changes, most books I read always go from a 3rd person view and the 1st person works great.
But there were a few " where where was no speech, and as soon as Xipil said that Stone was expeled in the last chapter I knew she was a traitor, still very good story nearly up there with writers of really good books keep up the good work.
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