Awww so lovely! I was touched and can completely relate. I especially like the fact that there is a bit of prose in every verse it really makes this poem unique. Well done, you definitely spoke from the heart on this one didn't you! :)
This is a perfect example of a brilliant piece of writing! The verses flow easily into one another and the syllables match profoundly.
I can relate to this poem very strongly, and see no flaws in the grammar or spelling. Thankyou very much for sharing your poetry with me, and do feel free to take a look at my own: En route from A to B.
Take care and keep writing!
Elena.
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