A very interesting story. I liked the premise, as tragic as it did seem, but it came out to be quite fitting in the end. The plot and the characters came together seamlessly. Nice work!
Excellent poetry. The repeating of the last line throughout each stanza really makes the poem flow together really well. The genuine emotion in this piece is undeniable! Great work!
This piece is devoted to the love of two middle aged women who shared each other, heart, body and soul. It is a wonderful done piece that speaks straight from the heart and really makes you think. I found it to be refreshing to read poetry of this type since not too much of it touches on the subject of God and homosexuality. This piece speaks my views perfectly: Love is love, regardless of the physical form. Again, well done.
This is a great piece of writing and the only thing I would suggest is breaking up your paragraphs a bit. They were a little hard to read since it was almost all bunched together. Otherwise, great subject matter, wonderful imagery and word choice, and beautifully done! Great work!
I enjoyed the "Old English" style of writing that was used throughout this entire poem. I must admit this poem is a wonderous example of fantasy themed poetry. Your word usage is excellent and befitting of the poem. Wonderful work and please, keep writing fantasy. You have a knack for it!
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