This was amazing, I really enjoyed this poem. "My soul flies as if pulled by a rope" was one of my favorite visuals you gave. Thanks for sharing this, please keep writing.
Beautiful write Belinda, I love the metaphors and the wording. I find it to be colorful and intriguing. I hope to be able to write as well as you do someday.
Thanks for sharing Lollie! I think that's one great lesson to learn, and it's even better that you learned when you did. Some of us don't find this out until it's too late.
This act of kindness should be spread thoughout the world, This was definitely a touching and heartfelt story that I hope makes a positive impact on the fellow readers.
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