The poem speaks of a man in love with his wife. Although it seems that her feeling have changed over the years They become less. Its a poem a lot of people can relate to if they've been separated. Or divorce. Just to know that what ever choice she make it will be the choice that will leave her happy
The poet would be fine just as long as his wife is happy in the end even if he hurts with the final decision.
Oh wow, this was out of the normal for me, but I truly enjoyed this story. Your characters are unknown and that's what makes it more appealing that they have no names only the I believe I may be wrong, only the Ships are named. I really liked the ending on how the women, must keep moving forward and destroy the ship Titus because it was contaminated with aliens. over all Great work, i give it a 4.5.
I really enjoyed this chapter, your character are very intringing and the details of the town really flow, The witty humor some of your character have is what really brings them into life. I am dying to find out what happens next in the chapter and that shows your real talent when you leave your readers wanting more. I'm offically a fan of your work and cant waite to see what happens next with, Athenais.
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