Angela's (shubhraapurve) Reviews

Angela

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14 Public Reviews Given

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#3584147

Review of Words From Snowbound

Review by Angela

Rated: E

| (4.5)

A very nice work Valen.....i'm not a qualified poet yet but i aim to be one someday......i love to read a lot and have read a lot of short poems and haikus.........this poem of yours.reminds me of life...if i'm interpreting it ri8.........i would like to know more about it.plz send me a note if you can.i'll be thankful.
Angela.

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#3584103

Review of There is a war inside of me

Review by Angela

Rated: E

| (4.0)

A very nice poem..um ........red lips......well this fight that you mention occurs in every single mind in the world...nice to read it in words.....choice of terms is nice....and expressions are great......the contradiction clearly shows........ beautiful work.
Angela.

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#3581239

Review of The Fog

Review by Angela

Rated: E

| (4.5)

hi elemenopy.....a very sweet and intriguing work..really fascinating...a real love story if i may say.yet i do not understand the role of the father of the man....was he dead too...and the two boxes.....they were the coffins ri8? one of the man who loved emily and who did the other box belong to? plz answer if u can......

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#3581229

Review of The Wanderer, Part Two

Review by Angela

Rated: 13+

| (3.5)

hi matthew....nice work....the style of writing and the choice of words is great......it was captivating to a certain point.....enjoyed the one act incidents...hope to read more and better......yet a certain factor of attraction is needed.........waiting for the next part...
Angela.

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#3581198

Review of Trick or Tweet

Review by Angela

Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

hey tom...it seems as if i will have to become your regular reader......u write to good .......i loved your work in this one too......what imagination....i really like sci-fi novels....and the fatal consequences and dangers.....posed by the technology on human kind due to human kind........this topic has got great scopes.........and your work is one of the best utilisation........

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#3579289

Review of In Dreams

Review by Angela

Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)

hi max,
this story was really ironic...i could never have imagined this kind of an end..... the diction is great.....a kind of story that forces the mind to anticipate the end.....and not leave the desktop until each and every word has forced its way in the mind for good...lovely.

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#3577479

Review of The Sound

Review by Angela

Rated: 13+

| (3.0)

Hi Tom,
I went through your story and your writing style is really nice, including your description of the events. It's really a mind binding story. But i really hate to tell you that i was disappointed at the climax.......do you have a sequel for this story...if not then plz do me a favour and tell me where that noise came from..........i'm dying to know.