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Review by Lilli Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (1.0)
I didnt't really get this quiz, or even how to submit. What was the point of the master dude opening box c when u picked a? and how was i supposed to pick??? I clicked submit quiz, cuz i didnt know what to do.. does that mean i cant try this quiz again?
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Review by Lilli Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
HAHAHA that is soooo funny and soooo cute! Wow lol the part about sneaking a shower at the gym made me laugh so freaken hard! youy have a unigue way of writing and i love it! im 17 and ive been in love once and i did some things that i wouldnt normally becaue he liked them! lol love the way u told that story!
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Review by Lilli Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (3.5)
Great poll. i totally support gay marrages, because we are people too! lol yes, i'm gay, well bisexual.
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Review of Snow Dragon  Open in new Window.
Review by Lilli Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
I didn't really get the main point of the poem, but it was still beautiful and i wish i was as good of writing as you are!!!!!!!!!! Keep writing and expressing yourself because you have a talent! Keep it up!!!!!! its a great thing to do when you have nothing else to do, just to be able to write like that.
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Review of Winter  Open in new Window.
Review by Lilli Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Whoa! You're good at photography, photo editing and poems!!!! I love writing poems and I love taking pictures! I can tell you do too, it's a good thing to like something, and it's a major bonus if you also VERY good at it!! Which you are!

Did you photo edit the picture that has your name on it? Cuz that amazing!

Snow is awsome, except when you have to shovel it, and when someone throws a snowball in your face!

Great poem, i felt alot of what you were feeling when you wrote it!
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Review of Reflection  Open in new Window.
Review by Lilli Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
OOOH!!!!! That is sooooooooo awesome!!!!!! You can hardly tell what it is, but that doesn't matter! What matters is that it's georgious!!!! How did you get such a great shot?

Wow, I've looked and commented on a few of your pictrues, you're great at taking pictrues, are you a photographer? If you're not, WHAT ARE YOU WAITING FOR? lol you're great. I'm thinking of becoming a photographer ... maybe you should check out some of my work ... I haven't gotten any pictures on yet, but I will soon.

Keep taking pics, cuz you're great!

Sorry my review is so long ... it's not just for the rewards ... I really mean everything I'm saying!
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Review of the mist  Open in new Window.
Review by Lilli Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
I love the mist, and I love you picture! Those leaves are really bright! The are the first thing in the picture that caught my eye!

I also really like the water coming up in the bottom left .... it's pretty!

Those leaves are amazing ... I like them best =) lol

Great job!
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Review of Alaska2004  Open in new Window.
Review by Lilli Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Oh!! Alaska is so beautiful! And you're a great photographer!!! I wish I could take such amazing pics! I'm thinking about being a photographer sometime ... maybe I'll be able to take good picture like you!

I think these pictrues are amazing! I don't know you, but I hoped it was fun to go there! or if you live there!
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Review of My signature  Open in new Window.
Review by Lilli Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
The first thing I did when I saw this was "Whoa!"

I think it's amazing!! Love the color in it ... did you make the lettering?? Oh and ... love the picture! I think it goes really well with the design thing ... circle you did around it !!

Keep it up! I think you're great ... nice name btw =) I like writing my name funky too ... but I never thought of putting it together with a picture!
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Review by Lilli Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
YAY!!!!! I love you!!! You poems are so amazing!!! I've read three of your poems and wow ... I'm just so amazed!!!

When I was reading this poem I felt like I was accually there with you, your poem was so ... it just made me smile.

You are an amazing writter and I love your writting!! There's so much emotion in your writting.

I first looked at your stuff because of the GPS I would get , but now, all I care about when I read your stuff is the emotion!

if you want please feel free to check out my stuff! :)
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Review by Lilli Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
I just finished reading another one of your poems and thought it was great, but this one was amazing. There is so much emotion in that poem, it says so much.

I felt the pain, I felt that you were proud of them, I felt it all.

I know how you feel, I feel with you. This poem touched something inside me.

It's such an amazing poem. I was in tears while reading it, both because it was so beautiful and also because I felt the emotion.
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Review by Lilli Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
Wow! I don't really know much to say! I read it and I wanted to read more! I somehow felt I could connect with what you were saying when you wrote, what you were feeling. It is a very good poem. I don't know what the first one you said you wrote in 2004 looked like, but I bet it was just as good as the re-written one that I just read :) I like your poem.

Keep writting, you're obviously really good and been writting for a while =)
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Review of Randomness 2  Open in new Window.
Review by Lilli Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Boredom IS very horrible. Everyone hates being bored. Maybe try sleeping if you're bored, when you're asleep time goes by faster and stuff....

Life can be tragic, but it can also be very magical, you don't know what is going to happen, anything can happen. Life is very mysterious too.

Yes, Friday was very very fun, not much time in between, watching movies, eating, pillow fighting and computer for bordeom was there eh??

Want a pillow? Huh? Do ya? Do ya?

lol
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Review of Rock Bands  Open in new Window.
Review by Lilli Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
I don't know much about old rock bands, but this is a really great puzzle, i love puzzles, but certain ones take me hours, this was one of them, and unfortinitly, i didn't even get all of the right, i wonder if i got any .... anyways ... good puzzle =)
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Review of Randomness  Open in new Window.
Review by Lilli Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (1.5)
What exacltly is this? Hmm .... well ... anyways, let me tell you one this ... that IS insane, because YOU ARE NOT BEING TORCHURED!!!!!!!! You're loved =) tehe I freaked you out with that last thing =)
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Review of Blah blah blah  Open in new Window.
Review by Lilli Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
FOCUS!!!!! This sounds alot like myself ... I know the teacher is talking, I see his mouth moving, but ..... just nothing or a hum of nothing .... but if you tell yourself to FOCUS FOCUS over and over, you'll also miss the lesson because all you could hear was yourself repeating FUCUS several times .... oh and also doesn't help if you have an annoying friend beside you talking in your ear none stop (Hi!).
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Review by Lilli Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
That is amazing! There was so much emotion in it!!!!! I can relate to all of it! I was sexually assulted when I was 14 (I'm now 15) and I changed me, changed how I looked at things, how I communicated with people. Just like the name of this, "i said no Mr. Robinson" Well, I wanted to say no, but I was afraid, scared that he would hurt me ... I only said yes because I was frightened .... I wanted to get away to stop what he was doing ... and the only way I could think was to give in, now I know that was a bad thing to do, and sometimes I think it's my fault ... but people tell me over and over it wasn't ... I was scared that's all ... I also think of how many other girls did this happen to? How many were there? How many never told anyone?
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Review by Lilli Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This poem is very touching, it had me on the first sentence.
Very deep and it shows alot of emotion.
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