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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I started this read with curiosity and after the third journal entry confusion and a little fear for Eldon. I do like the journal style of writing and you did a good job at keeping the journal going. I would have liked to see a journal entry between the death of Max and the recovery moment but over all great writing. after a few months of entries I am glad you gave the closure we needed. This story rings so true to our own lives and raises quitions about how far is to far. You ended with a think for yourself moment that I feel closed nicely.
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