I tend to lean towards a difrferent style of writing and/or subject matter so although the piece was well written it didnt sit w/me or make me feel what u were writting. There were some parts that didnt seem to flow as well as they could have but that could just be me. Over all it was a nice piece.
To me that piece sounded very heartfelt, and words right from the heart are usually the hardest to get out at least getting them out so others can understand where u r coming from. I thought it was well written. if u check my portfolio i wrote 1 called "What u love may be gone" it was written 4 my friend whoes fieance passed. It might make u feel a little bit better!
WOW My god that was awsome! One of the saddest things I have ever read, but none the less it was awsome. Your story brought tears to my eyes. It was well written and the switch from the first paragraph was to me not the expected path I thought this piece was going.
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