"The Only Being", interesting, a religious writing. It's unique how you managed to write a religious text, without actually giving name to "Him", making it accessible for everyone. Throughout the text you make it clear for the reader that only through "him" you can find help, answers for your prayers.
As I said in previous reviews, I don't really fancy poetry, but I wanted to give an input on this, "Heart in hands". I found it interesting, I liked how it slowly changed its tone, from the darker mood, at the beginning, to the more optimistic and hopeful tone at the end. Keep on writing!
I took the time to read your poem, "Gypsy Child". I must admit, I am not a huge fan of poetry, but the title of your poem got me intrigued. First of all, what I read was very different from what I have expected, based on the title. It's a good thing, so don't take it the wrong way. I like the choice of words and they way you used them, thus making it a nice reading for me. Congrats and keep on writing!
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