this is amazing it's supposed to be so sad but you even threw in humor that my friend is skill! I can't believe how this just works it rocks!!!!! I would never be able to describe this in one word. If you hadn't thrown in that little bit at the very end i would be crying, and i never cry at books, stories, poems, or movies. This is so great I really just can't believe it!!!!! Great work keep it up!!
this is so sweet, i know how you felt and most likely still do, i just lost a friend to breast cancer, she was taken at 13 but its all in gods plan for us. When we look back at our fond memories i always think about acts of kindness from a friend or family member. Your brother sounds so sweet and I think its awesome that you gave his name as the middle for your son. Keep on writing
THIS IS SPECTACULAR!!!!! I love free style. ofcourse I can't write it myself but THIS IS UNBELIEVABLE!!!!! I love your last paragraph. great choice of words. I'm not much of a writer but I can try but you can bet mine won't be as good as this. I strong choice of words. I love it! your second paragraph was awesome too! keep on writing
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