This is really nice . Its benefits so much .. on how to have a happy wedding even in a a small budget ... awesome piece of work and all i have to say is many many people are going to benefit from this , and many are going to appreciate this too ! keep on writing and have a pleasant week ahead ! :)
Nice piece of work we have here ... Really nice though could have been nicer , but then its okay and nice . sweet and simple . Go on writing its really nice to have writers like you on this site ! All the best and have a pleasant week ahead ! Keep up the good work ! :)
Hey that was a nice one .. I can tell by your writing that you are a good storehouse of writings .. have to read your other work ... You have done good justice to this story and have written it well .. Really liked the concept .. Go on writing for this site needs more writers like you ! All the best and have a pleasant week ahead ! ,, :)
Whoa .. A lot of twists and turns to the original story .. But hey its good but then you should have made it a happily ever after story .. This one has a sad ending .. I was wondering if you could do that , i mean change the ending .. Otherwise its a nice story . Simple and sweet ! Keep going ! :)
Saddest poem ever ! Beautifully written .. How can you write so well ? I wonder , love the idea of the poem . You have justified well to the title of the poem . And the concept is great !!
Never again upon this place
Will an ounce of sorrow I waste
I really love these lines .. Ah ! what more should i say .. Awesome work and keep creating more !
Man ! You write so much ... You have so much in your portfolio . ! I chose to write a review because I wanted to tell you this ! This is seriously awesome , carry on with this work ,By the way have you tried publishing your work ? Just try , You might get lucky somewhere . I am so lazy to write just a few writings and you have written like you have writing your entire lifetime . Good job , really inspired from you :)
Well The prose you have written is some piece of work .. It conveys your understanding of your surroundings .. But then again what I have to say is that you could have made this piece of work so much more better > Other than that the prose is short simple but SWEET . It conveys great message . Keep on this good work . All this was to encourage you not to let you down . :)
Well first of all is this poetry ? I mean is this also a way we can write poems . I am not that experienced so asking . Other than that the writing is good . I like this line - And now, the train, which is not to be slain but will, is slowly chugging up a hill.
The writing has inner hidden meaning which is what i like about it ..
Good work carry on ... :)
Good line of words , but then you could have arranged them in the form of real poem lines , you know , thats my suggestion (i may be wrong ) But then life is well portrayed in this poem . Justified the concept and used a lot of mind on it .. it can be seen .. :D keep on the good work . the site needs more writers like you ... :)
This poem has a good concept .. but one teeny weeny suggestion which i feel , i may be wrong .. but i want to say that i feel the flow in the poem is lacking , like continuity , hope you understand .. Other than that its a nice and unique topic to write on , and you have justified well to the concept .. keep on the good work , this site needs more writers like you :)
Nice lyrics ... Its gonna make it an awesome song ... The topic is really great and it suits the entire song..
The entire song carries a wonderful concept and is conceived really well ...
I really loved the first stanza
"When we are far
From the sound of rain
The touch of love
The noise of trains"
Well said ... in war there is nothing gained but loss of life and complete sadness .. the idea for the poem is really good .. the general idea is shown out well ... at least in poems but it is really nice to visualize of a land without sadness and pain and things like war ... nice work again :)
Oh too good. i have always wanted to write something like this ..
the second last line about misunderstanding leaves a sad effect on the reader .. but it has been visualized and conceived really well . The title is also very effective .. and it talks of the past in a sad but encouraging way ...
go on with this work :)
Awesome work and great interpretation ... Loved your use of words, you made it sound so effective . Your work is really inspiring to all those who aspire to write ...
you have a chance to make your name big in the world of literature . keep on writing .. wish you lots of luck :)
Really good , it sounds like a classic and like its from a well experienced person .. The poet has done a great job in interpreting the words of the poem which are arranged really well . And are very inspiring to all those who read it .. Go on with this and you will reach success in no time .. Congrats :)
A good story which interpreted very well ... and gives out a good example for further comedies and thrillers ....
The author has done a great job and i would like to congratulate him for that ... Go on with this spirit and go on inspiring all young authors who have that wish to write in their minds .... :)
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