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Review of Why?  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
its a good story.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
i like the questioning and how its very detailed with your feelings.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
i really liked the dialog in the story
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Rated: E | (5.0)
very good story love you!
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
very good story
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Review of Always a Victim  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (2.0)
i would have liked to know what it was that was happening. otherwise it was a good story
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
i liked how the characters communicated and how it turned out he got scared more than anyone else.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I really liked this story it had good imagery. I found it very humerous
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I like this poem because of all the detail that you have put into it. It seems as if someone had beat you down and you still rise. Sometimes you need to let go and "move on" because that person is no longer worth your time.
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Review of Bliss  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Once again so short but so much detail at the same time. I love it! good job Charlotte!
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Review of Fingerprints  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
i love the simplicity of this poem its so short but says so much at the same time. It gives off a sense of imagry and for it to be so short it is hard to find a poem that sounds that good thats that short. Keep up the good work!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Very good description in this poem. I like how it shows so emotion so that readers can feel exactly what you are feeling.
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Review of Innocence  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
this is extremely relatable. As you get older things change and people who once were your best friend hates your guts. being young and innocent there is not a care in the world.
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Review of Five minutes  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I can relate to this because words can basically mean nothing at all in five minutes. your whole world can change in five minutes. one minute eveything is okay and the next your world can come crashing down.
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Review of Freedom  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I liked that she finally got away from his iron-fist. That she finally got a piece of happiness and freedom. Some aren't as lucky as she. Men think its okay to beat and hurt the women that love them the most and some women are to blind to see that everything he says and does is a lie.
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