\"Writing.Com
*Magnify*
SPONSORED LINKS
BY ONLINE AUTHORS
Printed from https://writing.com/main/profile/reviews/shawnte
Review Requests: OFF
3 Public Reviews Given
3 Total Reviews Given
Public Reviews
1
1
Review of Trick or Tweet  Open in new Window.
Review by Shawnte Barr Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Your story is coming along good I think you need to go back and add some scene and some more imagery in it. You have good dialogue, but some tags you should work on like: you can just put _____said instead of something like ________ said again. You have to make every word count. It does get a little confusing in some spots so you need to go back and fix those.
1 Reviews · *Magnify*
Page of 1 · 25 per page   < >
Printed from https://writing.com/main/profile/reviews/shawnte