Sad and depressing story, the poor dog. It was a very well written story, too. I enjoyed reading it, completely. I have a dog in real life and, he would sacrifice his all too, even though he is a coward. But, that is how a dog's behaivor is. keep writing!
So funny and random, although I thought that this story lacked a little description. I also thought that the chapters were short and lacked the factor of amazement. The idea of the story though is very funny and neat, keep writing!
(P.S. A giant yellow umbreon would br the best pokemon ever!)
Wow, such a great story, I could read it over and over again, no lie. I almost literally worship pokemon and I though that this story deserved two thumbs up. By the by, I am writing a pokemon story too. If you could check it out and tell me how I am doing I will be greatful!
(P.S. That's a pretty large GP award that's being given out. lol)
Greatly written and very funny. Will Espeon ever see that umbreon does not love her? I think that you should continue writing great stories. By the by, I write pokemon stories too, you should check the one i'm working on out. Keep wirting!
(P.S. I LOVE UMBREONS!)
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