Sharp, witty and clever, this is a nice little story about a highly appealing character with a good, if unusual, attitude to life but which also has a great sting in the tail that is sure to make the reader smile.
This has the potential to be a quaintly charming little tale but which feels a little pointless and vague as it stands. It also needs a thorough proofread due to the many punctuation errors which also let things down.
An original, scary and imaginative story that is well told and very compelling. The writing is simple but strong and pulls you along to the thought-provoking climax.
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