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Rated: E | (4.5)
Very Nice Poem Angles!! It's very detailed, very.. Attractive. ( xD ) The amount of effort you must of put into this shows, the poem is very nice! One thing I think I may of notice that the beginning was a little weaker, but then through the middle it got stronger. Though on the good side you kept it the same throughout, the poem didn't waver, nor did it change. And that itself makes it a Lovely poem to me!! Their are some things to watch but all in all it is a Very, Very, Lovely poem!! Keep Writing! ~Shades
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Very nice Poem!! It had a very nice vibe to it, making me wanting to know what was coming next!! I loved how each part of them poem went with the other, most people do have a hard time just trying to think what to put.. Also the rhyming was very addicting.. :3 One thing I would recommend that if you want to advance ( or you can ignore this since I'm no expert.. lol) Is adding a little more to it, and also give a little but more detail like, add more to it.. But over all it was a Very nice poem!! Keep writing! ~Shades
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Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
I love it!! The detail in the charters was beautifully done, and the information is easily to understand! Jon's feelings are really captivating! One thing I have a question on is like where they are at but that may be in the second part.. I wanna keep reading! Keep up the good work! ~Shades
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