Short read its nice after all what better influence for stories like this than ones own grandfather however if I can say one thing about this is its to Short it may have been better if you went into more detail of certain events implied in this story
No afence but I hate fan fiction that combines characters from to different franchise I'm not saying this story is bad I just don't like this kind of story especially when I know both of the characters in the fanfiction it's just very uncomfortable for me to read
The story is very interesting as I myself sometimes have to remember it a true story and one thing that helps show that is the message at the end of the story because it's true always apreshiat the moment of now because when we least expect it tomorrow may never come
Really long read but still very interesting and entertaining the situation sounds believable but if I have to be negative about one thing is that personally I got lose and confused reading it going back over the same paragraph several times but everything else is great
I just don't know where to start this interactive is nothing short of incredible letting you choose the exact scenario for your spasific character of choice both good and bad (the affinities not the grading) and one character who I believe is named after a character princess for my little pony
OK so I haven't gotten far in this interactive but that's mostly because of how many options there are at the beginning and I don't have payed membership so I still could only see so much but with what little I did see I can say for certain I can't wait to read more
OK honestly speaking here I clicked on this story interactive because I thought I was related to Nights the SEGA character and I was mabby right honestly speaking I've never heard of night until about 1 year ago so this is a definite eye opener for me thank you
I will say this I am not someone can be easily impressed by something right away but I was for this right from chapter 1 the story gets going in so many different directions and it makes them all work and I know it's easy to just put detail chapter after detail chapter but this doesn't
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