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Review of Part I; Chapter 5  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
An excellant chapter.
I feel you are really starting to develop your character Sage. The emotional apect of this chapter is much improved on the previous ones i feel, and the fight scenes are vividly described.
A more detailed review is postd in hte fantasy novel workshop.
Rose
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Review of Inspiring Dreams  Open in new Window.
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
this flows nicely and has honest sentiment I can relate to. There are no typos thT i SPOTTED.
gOOD JOB, WELL DONE.

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Review of In the Beginning  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.0)
A pleasent poem.
Good luck in the contest.

Rose

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Review of Just One Chance  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, I'm here returning your review.
What an inspirational, heart warming short.
Well done.
Rose

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
AWWWWWWWWW..beautifully written and constructed, with powerfull emotions conveyed. Well done.

Rose
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