This story was excellent. It took a short while to get into it, past the Church and whatnot. But it gained depth quickly and touched my heart (yes, I did read your note at the top ). However, when Amy died, it was too studden. Too abrupt. If it was paced for a little longer, it would be perfect. Other than that, it is sensational
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