Hey I'm just like that fan fiction is my thing, anime though mostly Naruto. I'm 29 but regress to a teenage level mentality part of my illness. I hope you make it to be a writer. Anything in the works? I've got a few ideas but nothing concrete mostly YA stuff.
I liked the way you described the scene for us in details.I could actually feel myself there in that hotel. Not sure what happened to his mother though. Was she panicking because of the market or was she remembering a something which happened to her in a similar market? Was she just as awed as the boy David?
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