one word hon, AWESOME... I can relate to this SOOOOOOO much, in fact I just went through this yesterday, so congrats and keep writing this was brillant and it made me laugh too. It's good to know that I'm not the only one going through this.
This is an excellent poem and you should be very proud of this one it's so touching and true and I'm actually going through this right now so it especially speaks to me! Great job and be sure that you keep wrighting, I'm not kidding for a short poem this is so amazingly true!
This is so true, I can totally see where you're coming from...I refuse to be as dull and boring as this world and you would know this if you read my profile, but this is so full of emotion and honesty it's hard to disagree with it, I think you are going to get high marks on this one.
Wow, this was a very deep and moving song. I could really feel the emotion running through the entire song, and the chorus was just simply beautiful. I loved the ending line that really had that last, great impact on it and I think it really tied the entire song together. Great job, and keep writing like this you can really do amazing stuff.
P.S. before I forget the reason I like this song a lot is that it covers both points about how love is beautiful and yet tragic at the same time, plus not to mention EVERYONE can relate to this song. So like I said above keep writing!
um, okay if this is about a person who self-mutilates then I'm really offended because I used to and if those are you your thoughts on it then you obviously haven't thought it all the way through because maybe this person is bipolor or manic-depressive, meaning they need help. Or newsflash maybe something terrible happend and you don't know about so before you judge why don't you think einstein.
I love it, this poem is so beautifully cruel and honest. I think I've been through this a time or 5. Thanx for sharing this beautiful song to writing.com fanatics. I loved the chorus, but I loved the 2 verse that made me smile, it was wonderful so keep writing and never give up!
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