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Rated: E | (4.5)
I really enjoyed reading this poem. You can see the emotion that was behind the words. The only things that I would change are maybe removing an s from the word resides, to make it reside and adding a S to star to make it stars.
I think that it is a beautiful poem though regardless. Very touching.
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