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Review of Twisted Mister  Open in new Window.
Review by sdgallthetime Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
I have really enjoyed reading this,more than several times I read a paragraph and the lines reach out to me. I find parts, well all of it as a hole reinforces my belief of how all men are even the ones I just know are pretending to be something they are not. My self included. I related this to religion and all the pastors who preach fire and brimstone one day a week like it clears them to do what they want until they get caught. in the last paragraph I find my desert the fact that they will have to live with theyre actions while condeming the rest of us. I am not a critic by no means, so I am unable to say any thing good or bad. I do know I liked this very much!
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Review of Untitled Part One  Open in new Window.
Review by sdgallthetime Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I have to start out my review by saying that I was reading poems written by my personal fav. I was in a off mood and was just browsing thru my favorates personal, public library and found this one. under the title it says the original version that no one seems to understand. so I had to read it, i wanted to know if I fit into the not under standing crowd. Well I still dont know, to me I was able to put my own feelings of all things in life, into the spaces in between the words. This made me realize that I have made it through all these phases of termoil in my life. Possibly just drama to every one else! But it was hell for me. I feel better now cause in my mind I am not alone. I have no tip for improvement, and I rated this like an E.R. my pain on a scale of 1 to 5, 5 being the worst I gave it a 4
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