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Review by sctheriault Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (2.0)
My problem with this story is its short length. There are only 8 chapters and while they are decently written, the fact I read throuh the whole story in 5 minutes isnt a good thing. The author needs to start contributing chapters himself since you can't just rely on the community.
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Rated: 18+ | (1.0)
Not much to say with this one, its decent concept but with only 5 chapters (and ones a troll chapter that hasn't been removed for some reason) there's no real point in reading it. My suggestion to the author is to add some chapters of your own until its a decent length, that should drum up some interest for it and maybe get some community contributions. The best chapter is the "familiar smell" one, and its the only one that has any gts interactions at the moment.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Great premise, but needs more content and some spellchecking.
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