It seems that we always give more than we get in most situations, and relationships. I think we all have to rejoice in the giving rather than expecting to receive, and not getting what we deserve.
Try to get off on the giving, and really get into it, and you can almost forget about the getting. I think you'll find out when you do that the real receiving will begin.
We all are on a journey to an end that was mapped out a long time ago by someone much higher than we can ever be on this plane. The journey is all we have, and who we touch along the way.
I wrote a piece for a contest that put our souls in these bodies as a punishment for past sins. You will have to admit that there's only one way out, but I'm sure when our time is done we move on to a better place.
I liked your work. It makes one think.
Very powerful message indeed. We who have plenty find it hard to immagine what it's like to wonder where your next meal is comming from. For me if I skip a couple of meals I'm ready to double over with stomach cramps. The sad thing is most poverty is political in nature, and is all driven by an under current of greed that exists in our world.
Keep writing so that your voice will be heard.
A blow job is a very personal thing for a man. In fact many women use it to control their men. I liked what you wrote. Please expand on it, and let your readers know how you are feeling down deep in your soul, about giving that kind of enjoyment to another.
I want to know how it gives you pleasure to take his hardness in your mouth.
Keep up the good work.
That was powerful! Isn't it nice to be swept away in passion? Our whole world works primarily on passion anyway, and we all get caught in it's trap everyday.
You expressed yourself well in this piece. If you really did give in, you both experienced a healing of sorts. Can that be all bad?
Very interesting, and erotic at the same time. Most poetry opens up the mind of the reader for further thought, and yours does that as well.
Keep up the good work.
I like the poem, however I don't know if I could dance to it. It does have a nice beat. There's nothing like slappin hides to brighten up the evening, or any time of day.
This was a little base, but sex can be fun without the flowers and wine as well.
Keep up the good work.
Very thoughtful. So many times each day we have a chance to elevate all of humanity with merely what we ourselves do and say. The power of our words is mighty, and should be used with great care lest we create something really bad.
Please take a few minutes to read my piece called "ripples". I think you'll like it.
Keep up the good work.
scifib
I liked this, and was moved by it. We do have a God given power in this country that was given to us at birth. Most of us have never known poverty, or real need. We go about our daily lives thinking only of the next buck that we can make.
The one thing for all of us to worry about is that there are forces at work right now, to try and take our freedoms away from us. Sadly enough it is the people in our own government, and the corporate leaders. The real powerful people in the united states want nothing more than to eliminate the middle class.
The best thing we can do for the starving children all over the world is to become involved in the potical process, and get the crooks out of office.
We must take back control of our lives before it's too late, and we or our children will become the starving.
Thank you for writing this.
A very interesting piece. The story of love found, and love lost all in cyberspace. It's a new modern world after all. My thoughts are have fun, and let it all happen naturally. That way it's more fun because it sneaks up on you. Kepp writing, you're doing good
Very nicely written, and very deep. I will have to read it more than once to understand it's meaning. I'm guessing that you are a very introspective person with deep thoughts. I also feel that you are a lonely person that is searching for something or someone. The switch back and forth from boy to woman is a search for identity. This identity is not necessiarly sexual, but a search for a carefree lifestyle as opposed to a lonely one.
Keep searching, but don't try to hard. Sometimes the most valuable lessons come to us when we least expect them. Good luck.
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