I was hoping to see more of the couple in this chapter but its still a wonderful Chapter none the less I enjoyed all the little details from him washing his body to the imagery he has of her while he is in the shower its very hot I enjoy when a author put every detail they can into a story so its easier for the reader to see imagine it themselves.. Keep on writing
I want to read some more this story is cute I have enjoyed Please make some more I love the characters names did you base it on foreign names or where they just names you came up with cause I have to say I love the names I like to come up with unique names when I write a story some times it doesn't work out that way but you got to just let the word flow through the fingers... Anyways I just wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed this chapter of the story hope to see some more
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