it was good.
one of my favorite genre is scifi.
they never gave up on theyre work, which is a good thing.
it was generous of them to give the teleporter to those zeldra people. very kind
but at the end of the story was a bit off when they
said they completed the teleporter for all mankind to use?
if they gave it to the zeldra's, how can they use now? just saying im confused there. how can you sue something you don't have :) did they remake it?
if they did you should of decribed that part. but good story javascript:updateLine('BookOpen', '24');
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