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Review of THE CATCHERS  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Very lively and action-filled story that keeps the audience interested in what's coming up next.

However, there are a few times when it moves so fast that backtracking is necessary to properly follow what's happening.

Dialogue is fun and realistic, some not too common expressions, which is cool, as long as it's comprehensible.

Maybe some additional descriptive phrases here and there to place oneself correctly, and calm down these hormone-infested adolecent boys just a tad.

Good job, fun story.
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