Thank you for that beautiful poem. I really enjoyed reading it. I love the language you use like in line 11,
"They gently pull their sister deep". I don't know but to me it was really beautiful.
Thanks a lot.
Sarahh
Awe I really liked this peom. I think it's really true, and I think it's a good one to read if your in a bad mood. To me it brought up memories of good times, and bad times but mostly good ones.
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