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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Wow this is chapter was amazing, I was interested from the begining and I have to say I liked your character. She seems like a down to earth type of girl, yet she stood her ground and wanted to know what was going on and why the man had approached her. There was description and that was great, helped see a little of the scene that you were writing about. I loved reading this story.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
I am actually into everything vampire and have finally started one of my own, so I wanted say I liked this as the feeling coming though great, I would suggested not so many me's in one sentence. Other then that I loved the part where he said the only thing he loved or needed, is blood.
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Review of Don't Change Me  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
Wow, very powerful words. I think this would be a great song :)
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Review of Fearful Passion  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Hello, I just read the first chapter and I thought this was really good. I loved the interaction between the two. This chapter has me wanting more.
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Review of Noticing Newbies  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
So happy I came across this place, my name is Sapphire and I am an up and coming author. I am trying to get my work out there soon. I write erotic writing and would love to get to meet you.
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