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Not sure I have a style....I learn as much from you as you from me. I will point our typos, grammatical things if I see them. I love poetry and when it comes to stories, please nothing "dark"....not my thing.
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I will find typos, incomplete thought (unless I believe it is conducive to the poetry structure).
Favorite Genres
Romance, personal, periodicals with history, comical, stories about true life, children, animals, time travel
Least Favorite Genres
Dark, morbid, Sci-fi (except time travel)
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Dark, morbid stories
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I collected one of your trinkets, thanks. You have such beautiful artwork that I have been enjoying looking at all that you have done. It has been fun. THANKS!
Seabreeze

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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, first let me welcome you, Newbie! Hope you have a wonderful experience here.

You have me intrigued and I am wanting more. I assume there will be more. The title?, not complete? Is that because you are not sure where your characters are going to take you? So far, I like the mystery of it, so carry one and bring us more.

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this very much. We all need our quiet space and yours sounds wonderful. I have a question? Your second line, is it to read "...of my shoulders" or on my shoulders? In any case, it flows well and gives to reader a picture of your special place.

Seabreeze

p.s. Welcome Newbie
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Review of Writing.Com 101  Open in new Window.
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
A lot of information here to take in. I have a trinket I have tried to display. Did not work. My trinket has an ID with all capital letters. Is that the number (letters) I used to try and display it??
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
So glad I stopped by again. This is a very well thought out, heart felt poem. It shows that you have made sincere strives toward finding peace and wanted to maintain that peace. You have been able to communicate your hurts and your successess. You have taken the reader down the path that it takes toward that light that you have found.

Many blessings to you,

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
I will take 20
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Fascinating! I have never heard of this style of poetry writing; I will have to check it out!

You sound like a very happy person, how nice. To meet to many real happy folks these days.

Your poem seems complete in thought as it gives to read so many things to think about.

I am wondering if there really is a pink beach (how does it get like that?).

Best to you and your family with the holidays coming up.

Seabreeze
11.25.24
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Review of Thanksgiving  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Oh my goodness! That is a funny story. Did it really happen? I am sure it did. Hard to make that up. You wrote it well because I could see it all in my mind, the goings on, the dog and cat chase and who hasn't had relatives argue.

Great writing, thanks for the fun.

Best to you,
Seabreeze
11.25.24
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Review of Coronation  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
A cute poem. Bring all that royal glory to the front. I never think much about the royalty and never watch the ceremonies. I do occasionally watch what goes on in their chambers. Those folks speak their piece; it is fun to watch.

Very nice, thanks,

Seabreeze
11.25.24
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Review of Feral Mama Cat  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Wow, that is hard to imagine. How many kittens did she have. I could see carring one, possibly two but, ?? How far did she travel (miles)? Amazing story.

Seabreeze
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Review of Mirror  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I really like this poem and is does reflex us, the person looking in the mirror. It flows well and has a kind of bounce in its flow, which I like. Just a poem!

Seabreeze
11.22.24
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Review of Tax Evader  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Chris,

I think most of us have had to deal with IRS at sometime or another. Great writing prompt.
I like how you have it flowing, giving details as to what can happen in that nasty world.
The last two lines are the best as it is so true.

Best wishes on your continued success.

Seabreeze
11.21.24
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Interesting concept, one that has potential for a short. I am fascinated with using big numbers, both plus and minus. I even got sucked in to see what the sum total might be, ha, ha. I like this concept, like time travel, going back. I would like to see you take it further.

Great writing,

Seabreeze
11.21.24
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Review of Wyvern  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Wow Beholden! Where do I begin? First I must admit, I had to look up the word Wyvern. Griffins, I am aware of and gargoyles I love. I am not a big fan of mythical creatures though but I stopped to read because of the title of your story. I guess I have always been like that since I was old enough to brouse libraries (we still have them). Its fun to find out about the unknown.

As I read through, words started to grab! Or I should say phrases; who doesn't love a good phrase? I love how you used:

metaphorical diapers
deserve repayment
extracting vengeance
extant wyvern eggs (made me think of an Easter egg hunt)

I could not find a meaning for Erraghansic so I will assume that is your creation!

In any case, I followed most of the plot of the story but at certain areas I was not sure if your were rooting for the dragons or the humans, maybe both. I was still curious enough to hang in there. Because of your story, I just might investigate more mystical characters.

I was fascinated by the whole story, its creativity and truly felt it deserved a badge and so I immediately sent you one (I don't normally move that fast).

Overall, I had fun and will peruse your site for some more jewels!

Thanks for the adventure,

Seabreeze
11.21.24
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Beneath the Surface is an amazing anology describing what many of us have heard about mental illness. I must say I have never experience the illness first hand as I have not known or have had anyone in my family with mental illness. But you have laid out a picture in your poem that seems to encompass all the challenges one must deal with. This is a great way to share with the world the issue.

Your words so carefully outline what goes on at the same time giving hope where there is so much darkness. I would hope this poem has been shared with support groups and family members of those who are afflicted with mental illness.

Thanks for sharing this important poem. Blessings to you and your family.

Seabreeze
11.20.24
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Review of I don't mind  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Any mom or dad can enjoy this poem as its brings back memories for us older folks and sets the stage for those with little ones. Excellent format, choice of words and rhyme. Thanks,
Seabreeze 11.20.24
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Review of Odd, Isn’t It?  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Nani,

Beautiful writing...it says everything about the night sky. Love your choice of words, such as brilliance, diamonds scattered. Great writing.

Seabreeze
11.20.24
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Review of Ketchup  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Exciting! This is one poem form I am not acquainted with. To think that poetry would be blessed by the subject of food. There is no end to its creation. I guess we could dress up just about any food we may not like, say, egg plant!

You have done very well with it. I hope it won recognition.

Seabreeze
11.18.24
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Review of Bully  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Interesting poem on Bulling. I believe we have all experienced some of it at some point in our lives. How we react to bulling is so important. If we do embrace it then it becomes a nightmare. If we overly approach it, we may become as one who does the deed. Your poem brings out some of the ways it can influence us for good or bad.

It is a good write, thanks for sharing.

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love your short story. The concept...who would think of feeding air to someone. Very clever!
It's the type of story that could go on, become more. You have done well with the dialogue. I don't have any suggestions as to how to embellish on it.

Welcome again, newbie!

Seabreeze
11.18.24
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Review of Harvest Ball  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Wow, very impressive. I have to admit that I had no idea about the format of a Kyrielle poem and the work that goes into its construction! So, I did look it up and now I have a new style to try, thanks.

I love the fact that the last line is repeated because I like its sound and what it brings. And I love its rhyme aspect! I guess, one has to besure they check and double check that they have the right combinations of syllables. In any case, well done!!

Seabreeze
11.18.24
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | N/A (Review only item.)
Amazing love for the an author and her art! I love how you have brought her to life in sharing your love for her. It is fun to even take it steps further in sharing her dress, period of life style, parties, jewelry and more. I took my granddaugher to a tea party once, so much fun to dress and have a special time together.

Your story is complete, great detail, and I could not imagine that you have missed anything important about the writer. You have done well with Jane and I must check out your place for other great writes!

Blessing to you,
Seabreeze 11.18.24
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Review of Wheat  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Poetry allows us to examine life. Take your wheat. It tells us that in the wind, even mild, we see it moving in a breeze. I think of wheat that way cause we see mostly when moving. I love your "silent seas" as it is like an ocean when you see large fields of grain. And, yes - cut down in its prime so that it can do its magic for those who process it! Wonderful poem.

Seabreeze
11.18.24
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Review of Spring Diamante  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This type of poetry is so much fun. I love yours as it gives us everything we would want to acknowledge in seed! What I really like about a Diamente is that it can point out to us about life, life of a particular subject. It gives us a more focus on the parts of a subject. Great job on this one.

Seabreeze
11.18.24
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
A lovely poem. Who does not want His everlasting, heavenly and beautiful light? His return will surely bring us that!

You have captured the essence of what our Lord wants for us and what he provides for us, His children. If we could only see it; we need to open our eyes wider.

Your poem is well written having good flow, pulling in its reader as your beautiful descriptive words guide us. Not much more I can say. I love it!

Seabreeze
11.16.24
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