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Not sure I have a style....I learn as much from you as you from me. I will point our typos, grammatical things if I see them. I love poetry and when it comes to stories, please nothing "dark"....not my thing.
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I will find typos, incomplete thought (unless I believe it is conducive to the poetry structure).
Favorite Genres
Romance, personal, periodicals with history, comical, stories about true life, children, animals, time travel
Least Favorite Genres
Dark, morbid, Sci-fi (except time travel)
I will not review...
Dark, morbid stories
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Review of PEACE, Be Still  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Nicely written. I believe we all have been created as to what the Lord wanted us to be. He has a purpose for each and every one of us. Your poem says it well. It is wonderful that we are not all alike. It is also sad that so many, especially young, folks want to be like each other. And, so true how we are influenced by others, by rules and regulations, some for good, some for bad. Thanks for your post.

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
A very interesting poem. The poem has a rhythm, a beat to it. This attracts me to it. I am not normally much for the dark side but the words are beautiful and they flow. Well written and you wrote it so that it would dance, wow!

Seabreeze
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Review of Messier 64  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Fascinating photo. Did you take it?

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
First, let my say welcome newbie. Hope you find Writing.com to be everything you want it to be.

This is nicely done. I would not have thought to write an ode to my email friend but great idea. It completely tells of your relationship and your heart comes through in your poem. It gave me thought in how do I look at my friends here and so I reflect on them and what they mean to me. It is important for us to remember and give thanks to those that help and assist us in our writing. Thanks for your post.

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
You have done amazing job sharing your feelings, those deep hurts that haunt you. I want to hug you, reach out to you and I know nothing about you. You have a true talent for writing and if you can express the deep hurts you have, I believe you write just about anything you want.

I am glad you are hear at Writing.com. I think this is a great therapy, writing, a release. Not only can it help you but others will benefit. I say that because sometimes it takes another's hurt to help us come out of ours. Many of us don't know how to express it. You have given a lot here in your pain. We all have pain but not always able to express it and we need to get it out to recover.

Blessings to you my friend. Continue here. It just may be where you need to be.

Seabreeze
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Review of Soulmate  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Oh yes, I love this! You speak as I think about the ocean but you have been able to put it to words! Wonderful poem and I so enjoyed it!

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Great question asked in your poem! I guess it just is human nature. Well written and flows wonderfully. Oh yes we do pay, don't we?

Great writing,
Seabreeze
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Review of A Breath Of Life  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, great writing! I love your poem. So much greatness said in such few words. The opening line grabbed me as I am invited to see your struggles but warned about them. It is such an upbeat poem. Thanks for sharing.

Seabreeze
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Review of Secret Garden  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi,

I can see why you had an winning entry! Amazing imagination you have. I really got into the story. In fact, I wanted to be a fly on the wall for future looks into your Secret Garden!

Great write,

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
A new form of poetry that I was not aware of. I like it and you have done well to capture the ups and downs in life. Thanks for sharing and giving me a new form to try. Best wishes in your continue success.

Seabreeze
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Review of A Rough Justice  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Nicely done. So much in your description of justice that many feel. The poem flows and gives us a deep look into life as operated by men. Even though it seems to be somewhat brutal in explanation, it truly is how most of us see the system today.

Seabreeze
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Review of New to this...  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi again, Seabreeze here. I encourage you to do your bio and add to your notebook. That will get your juices flowing. Tell us about yourself, what you like to read, write, hobbies???

Hope to see you around,
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I collected one of your trinkets, thanks. You have such beautiful artwork that I have been enjoying looking at all that you have done. It has been fun. THANKS!
Seabreeze

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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, first let me welcome you, Newbie! Hope you have a wonderful experience here.

You have me intrigued and I am wanting more. I assume there will be more. The title?, not complete? Is that because you are not sure where your characters are going to take you? So far, I like the mystery of it, so carry one and bring us more.

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this very much. We all need our quiet space and yours sounds wonderful. I have a question? Your second line, is it to read "...of my shoulders" or on my shoulders? In any case, it flows well and gives to reader a picture of your special place.

Seabreeze

p.s. Welcome Newbie
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Review of Writing.Com 101  Open in new Window.
for entry "Beta: Trinkets" Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
A lot of information here to take in. I have a trinket I have tried to display. Did not work. My trinket has an ID with all capital letters. Is that the number (letters) I used to try and display it??
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
So glad I stopped by again. This is a very well thought out, heart felt poem. It shows that you have made sincere strives toward finding peace and wanted to maintain that peace. You have been able to communicate your hurts and your successess. You have taken the reader down the path that it takes toward that light that you have found.

Many blessings to you,

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
I will take 20
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Fascinating! I have never heard of this style of poetry writing; I will have to check it out!

You sound like a very happy person, how nice. To meet to many real happy folks these days.

Your poem seems complete in thought as it gives to read so many things to think about.

I am wondering if there really is a pink beach (how does it get like that?).

Best to you and your family with the holidays coming up.

Seabreeze
11.25.24
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Review of Thanksgiving  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Oh my goodness! That is a funny story. Did it really happen? I am sure it did. Hard to make that up. You wrote it well because I could see it all in my mind, the goings on, the dog and cat chase and who hasn't had relatives argue.

Great writing, thanks for the fun.

Best to you,
Seabreeze
11.25.24
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Review of Coronation  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
A cute poem. Bring all that royal glory to the front. I never think much about the royalty and never watch the ceremonies. I do occasionally watch what goes on in their chambers. Those folks speak their piece; it is fun to watch.

Very nice, thanks,

Seabreeze
11.25.24
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Review of Feral Mama Cat  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Wow, that is hard to imagine. How many kittens did she have. I could see carring one, possibly two but, ?? How far did she travel (miles)? Amazing story.

Seabreeze
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Review of Mirror  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I really like this poem and is does reflex us, the person looking in the mirror. It flows well and has a kind of bounce in its flow, which I like. Just a poem!

Seabreeze
11.22.24
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Review of Tax Evader  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Chris,

I think most of us have had to deal with IRS at sometime or another. Great writing prompt.
I like how you have it flowing, giving details as to what can happen in that nasty world.
The last two lines are the best as it is so true.

Best wishes on your continued success.

Seabreeze
11.21.24
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Review of Wyvern  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Wow Beholden! Where do I begin? First I must admit, I had to look up the word Wyvern. Griffins, I am aware of and gargoyles I love. I am not a big fan of mythical creatures though but I stopped to read because of the title of your story. I guess I have always been like that since I was old enough to brouse libraries (we still have them). Its fun to find out about the unknown.

As I read through, words started to grab! Or I should say phrases; who doesn't love a good phrase? I love how you used:

metaphorical diapers
deserve repayment
extracting vengeance
extant wyvern eggs (made me think of an Easter egg hunt)

I could not find a meaning for Erraghansic so I will assume that is your creation!

In any case, I followed most of the plot of the story but at certain areas I was not sure if your were rooting for the dragons or the humans, maybe both. I was still curious enough to hang in there. Because of your story, I just might investigate more mystical characters.

I was fascinated by the whole story, its creativity and truly felt it deserved a badge and so I immediately sent you one (I don't normally move that fast).

Overall, I had fun and will peruse your site for some more jewels!

Thanks for the adventure,

Seabreeze
11.21.24
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