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Not sure I have a style....I learn as much from you as you from me. I will point our typos, grammatical things if I see them. I love poetry and when it comes to stories, please nothing "dark"....not my thing.
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I will find typos, incomplete thought (unless I believe it is conducive to the poetry structure).
Favorite Genres
Romance, personal, periodicals with history, comical, stories about true life, children, animals, time travel
Least Favorite Genres
Dark, morbid, Sci-fi (except time travel)
I will not review...
Dark, morbid stories
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Review of Knock Out  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is such a cute story and we adults sure can relate. We have had personal experience with ourselves and our children. It brought back memories, so many memories.

It is well written and I was surprised someone had not rated it.

Excellent,

Seabreeze
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Review of Sign  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
My exact feelings about cats. I guess it is because where I live, too many feral cats. Your poem hit a spot with me. Dogs are more loyal but I will say, cats especially kittens can be cute.

Enjoyed reading your poem,

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi, welcome newbie!

Great poem and anology of the pen on paper. I am just not real sure of the phrase,

"The only time we get time to re-energize is when we are dead." I don't understand the possibility of this?

I like the energy you have put in the pen. Its click and flick...this is great.

And the last two lines....tells the whole story. Once it is down, you can't take it back.

Very creative poem.

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very nicely written. Yes, the key. Sometimes we don't know when we hid the key.

A wonderful metaphor about life. I guess it is best we only have the key to our own door. Nobody wants to see my dirty laundry.

Seabreeze
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Review of I Like Trees  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I am with you! I love trees as well and love your poem. In fact, my favorite is the California Pepper Tree. I grew up around them, climbed in them, used their berries in play. They flow in the breeze and have a unique smell. I will leave a picture if I may,




Also, I am leaving a trinket - just for fun.




Blessings to you,
Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi G.B. Williams,

Love this! I like that you have described the true evil in the world and that Satan is behind it. So many are afraid to say the truth. Love your phrases, telling us that God is not chaos. He is light, pure light to lead us through this life and prepare us for His amazing new life when He comes to take us home.

Blessings to you,

Seabreeze
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for entry "Fluffy" Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Another adorable write! You are becoming one of my favorites here at Writing.com.
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for entry "The Perfect Story" Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
That is amazing. To create such a quick dialogue; I was waiting to see what they found on the shelves. I felt I was listening to the conversation. Great writing.
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Clever. Morning coffee should just pop out for us like obtaining refreshments on Star Trek. Your poem did make me wait. But then I went and got my own cup. Excellent poem.
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for entry "Maybe" Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Nicely written with a bounce to it. We all have so many maybes in our life, this tells it!
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Review of Nobody's Shoe  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I love this. I like how you have the shoe telling a story; also running. It a cute story. I mean, why not a shoe. Even a jacket or hat could talk, right.

Enjoyed the read,

Seabreeze

p.s. I have one as well:
 
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Review of Two stars  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Beautiful. They could be real stars in the sky but I believe they are lovers. But their personalities just don't blend so their romance fades away.

But, this is beautiful and could be real stars from Heaven.

Excellent job in its presentation.
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Beautifully written. I could feel the close analysis that was given to one's self. Love surfaces: love for life, for others, for self. It shows how tragedy can effect us as in your sixth stanza. Your fighting for those you love.

It cannot imagine being involved in a war. I have such respect for those who have gone through it, gave so much and many times come away feeling alone, or left behind.

The last stanze: I give, I bend, I bear, I break - OMG, it is true how war has taken, how society has taken especially those who do not understand what many have gone through.

Thank you for sharing your poem.

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Great sampling of how words can really bring out a story, a poem. This is where I struggle; searching for the right word. It is easier to come up with words now than years ago we most likely had to go to the library to find what we were looking for.

Pictures make a big difference, if only used to stimulate the brain. Sure do appreciate all of your "help" tools that you provide on your site.

Blessings,
Seabreeze
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Review of The Old Door  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Nice poem. I think most of us can relate to a door that talks back, ha, ha!

Creaking floors trod by generations is a great phrase. If those floors could talk.

Fun read,

Seabreeze
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Review of Me and Binky  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Great story. It just tells us that Life a be a bitch! Or, life is not always fair. In any case, it was a fun read.

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very nicely described of the love and unity of a family. Hard to find that in this day and age.

Family baking brings you together! Wonderful way to share time with each other. Good food, good hearts!

Thanks for sharing,
Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I guess this would have went better if I was a male.

Interesting game you have created.

Thanks,
Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Beautifully written. It is true that what seems to be on the surface, it seldom is. I read your bio first and then picked one of your writings (with a ribbon), which lead me here. I am glad I stopped by.

It is always refreshing to read a writer who isn't afraid to share the innerself. I am sorry for your hurts but I also know we grow, even in our hurts, we grow. The "they" in your Alone in Holy Places, I would guess is of the "church". I have been there. I often wondered to myself, how can I been in a place where people seem friendly, caring but still I feel all alone. Is it that people become complacent?

I will be reading some of your other writes. Thanks for be you,

Seabreeze
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Review of Adriana A to Z!  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
How cool is this! I love the theme, the alphabet breakdown of a writing buddy. Great tribute to a friend. And, if you ever have a tiff, just come back and review why you two care for each other.

Wonderfully read,

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a cute story and a unique concept. You have done extremely well in describing her and what she was feeling as she grew. Her walking amoung things, expecially with a train coming makes for an exciting story. I can see this becoming a longer short or even a novel, maybe taking her back to a classroom setting and on....

Great job, and welcome Newbie!

Blessings,
Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Great hub. Love the concept, love the graphics, may I join? Sending 40K points to contribute to the pot!

Thanks,
Seabreeze

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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Heavy read as my heart went out to you. I am glad you decided to come to Writing.com and use this platform to express your feelings in writing.

A lot of emotion in your story. Some I could relate to as I was very shy from childhood thru a lot of my adulthood. Life was a struggle at many time. I tried to journal but was never consistent so I didn't have anything anyone would want to read. So sorry you never had the privacy that you needed.

You have a talent, keep it going. I wish you the best in all that you do. You are special, we all are. Because there is no one like you or like me. Isn't that amazing when we think about it. You will do special things.

Thanks for sharing from your heart.

Seabreeze
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Review of Love You Mom  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
How cool is this? Great story of a family memory. And to have the actual gift so that you can recall the memory over and over; not to many of us have that. It reminded me of something that happened to me when I was a teenager. My grandfather had ask if he could have something that I made. I was thrilled. I had made a picture of a bird using various color thread. I never dream he caried about those things. I did not live close to my grandparents so I do not know what happened to it.

Thank you for sharing such a heart felt experience.

Seabreeze
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Review of Oak and Roses  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wonderful description of this amazing library where jewels are housed. Just knocking with the lion's ring normally would shout out a "be aware of this place" to me. I guess I have seen to many scarry movies. And, even to this day with the internet, I still love libraries. You have set the scene well.

There is suspense as our character enters the sanctum (as I visualize it). I am thinking, is it safe? But once in, he lays his eyes on the abundance of books availble to him. What he is looking for must be there. Your description of a crackling fire, musty smell of antique paper resonates with me. I have experience this before when I was younger visiting a friend of my mothers.

Oak and Roses, how curious. I get the feeling this individual is looking for potions or magic spells. Or may the secrets to life itself.

Thanks for my adventure,

Seabreeze
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