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Not sure I have a style....I learn as much from you as you from me. I will point our typos, grammatical things if I see them. I love poetry and when it comes to stories, please nothing "dark"....not my thing.
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I will find typos, incomplete thought (unless I believe it is conducive to the poetry structure).
Favorite Genres
Romance, personal, periodicals with history, comical, stories about true life, children, animals, time travel
Least Favorite Genres
Dark, morbid, Sci-fi (except time travel)
I will not review...
Dark, morbid stories
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Review of Pay It Forward  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a great site. I love the concept of paying forward. So, how does one do so here? Is it gps that you are looking for or do you also track those in need of having a membership stay active? I would be willing to contribute to help with a membership cost.
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very nice poem with a wonderful rhythm. I think of the excitement viewers project when watching their favorite sport. Emotions get high, and then when not winning - let downs! And even headaches from yelling or maybe an injury to a player. Your poem identifies a lot.

Seabreeze
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Review of Commuting  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi newbie, welcome. Interesting short story. It tells of how everyday life can be so mundane. I was waiting to see if something special was going to happen? But, that probably would be to much to expect in a vignette. I have never written one so I am at a loss.

I question the single sentence (paragraph in its self?) shadows in the early morning light. Is it a complete sentence...not sure?

I wish you the best in your writing.

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
First, let me say hi newbie. I am sure you will enjoy your stay here and there is so much to learn.

This is a beautful poem. It has a special rhythm of its own. It flows well and it says so much about the beauty we all have available to us in nature and in people. Excellent descriptions of love, fascination, admiration for beauty and for life. Great writing,

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
OMG, I have run into more than I know what to do with. Then again, I am not train in this area but I can appreciate what goes into programming or coding, which this appears to be that on a smaller level. I marvel at what we humans can keep in our heads, utilize and create such beautiful and functional items. I have made Web pages using Blogspot.com. I felt good just being able to figure some of its designing attributes.

You have created and provided such a service here with your page design portfolia creations. I hope you get the attention and people utilize what you have made available to them that you deserve.

Blessings,
Seabreeze
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Thank you for the information you have shared. I often wondered what the passkey was all about. Also, get a little information, as here, on a major topic is easier to remember. I appreciate these snippets! Also, important information for those who are seriously considering a novel or other published works. Thanks again,

Seabreeze
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Review of Lost in my Place  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A wonderful poem that really take one into another's heart. We all sometimes forget about what can help to people when things change in their lives. Not everyone can experience a smooth transition. I feel the pain, so sorry.

Let me congratulate you in being recognized here at Writing.com. I welcome you newbie and wish you many blessings in your writing career and in your stay here at this hub.

Seabreeze
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Review of Dear Me 2025  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
You were so kind to review one of my writings (Teddy), so I thought I would return the favor.

I must admit, I love your humor that you have intertwined in your letter. The dialogue with yourself is very entertaining. I have to side with your other self; too much on your plate! However, I do not know you, your age, your energy but it seems like a lot. And to add, you were telling me that you needed something to do that would utilize your hands. Wow!

You should win this contest. I entered but I would be surprised if I win as mine is probably too serious. But it is meant to be. So far I am on track with my goals but I am 79 years old, have a husband, dog, play cards twice and week, sing at karaoke to mention a few. I paint, play a musical keyboard and love music. I sure wish I had your energy.

You know, I do believe you will meet those goals. I say that because I have broused your portfolio and seen how much you have already accomplished since joining in July 2023. So, I wish you the best in your goals and in this contest entry.

Seabreeze
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Review of Identicals  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Well that is quite some story. Just writing it and keeping the characters straight had to be hard. In fact, you need to check your quotes; many are missing. Your story flows well; it has a particular flare. It has intrigued me and I might read more if available. Do you plan on carrying it out?

Best wishes to you in your writing,

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is unique and very informative. Great idea. I like that these suggestions are all in one spot. And, it is interesting to see the different perspectives as well. I am very inexperienced in story writing but when I read, I want a good plot, something I can hang on to with the characters.

Thanks,

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Lovely poem and a nice tribute to your family. You are one lucky lady. Your poem tells a story of tender love, of caring and understand of each other. Sometimes a poem reminds us how fortunate we our in our lives. Great poem.

Seabreeze

p.s. Reading over your profile, I suggest you write another poem about a wife, a mother, a grandmother, a writer, a friend. You have it all my friend!
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Review of Infinite Blue  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love your infinite blue! I guess mostly because of the color. Your poem made me think of climbing a ladder as we do in life, trying to get ahead, striving, building up ourselves. I have one called My Color Blue under poems. Give it a look if you have time.

I will confess, I had to search to see what was meant by ascent long and treacherous. So, I learn something new. Thanks,

Seabreeze
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Review of Ontario Autumn  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is interesting. I like all of these that are mentioned. I also noticed it is a quiz. I noticed that you could make the box. However, not sure what you are suppose to do. Mark all or only one? You have a great idea in theory and structure. Best wishes too you in all your writing.

Seabreeze
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for entry "Serendipity" Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very nice, I like it! I like the way it flows, its outcome - and who can argue with Love at first site!

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I so wish this was entered in a contest because you would WIN!! The so funny that I will need to share it with my son. He is concerned about Social Security and even getting any (51 years old now).

You have done an amazing job with the acronyms, the story line...just everything!

My hat off to you!

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
OMG, that was funny. I love how you wrote this; the tie-in, the way you presented it. Great story, great writing.

Seabreeze
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Review of LAURIE  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Wow, I do see it was written years ago, but it still has a heavy ring. Blessings to you as it could not have been easy to write. It is tough when we lose a loved one. Some days it is like yesterday.

Your poem tell of your heart, you have relayed just all the emotions one could have with a loss.

Once again, so sorry for your loss,

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Beautiful! Yes, I remember when my husband passed and I worried I would not remember his voice. But, if I rest, silent, and think of him, I can remember the voice in my head. Maybe I am crazy, but I believe I do.

Blessings to you and enjoy your dad as much as possible.

Great writing,

Seabreeze
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Review of Writing.Com 101  Open in new Window.
for entry "Manage a Photo Album" Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi JACE,

I am back again. Where do I go to learn how to upload or add GIFs to my photo album or any item I have created.

Seabreeze
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Review of Non-Humans R Us  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Thanks for letting me see your site! Wow, very creative.

Also, thanks for the trinket! One coming at you,





Best to you,
Seabreeze
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Review of Writing.Com 101  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is great, thanks. There is a lot of information but maybe I am not looking in the right place?

Can a static item be changed to a book item? I have a static item that I keep adding to daily and plan on doing so each day for a year. Will I run out of space? Maybe I don't need to make it as a book.

Seabreeze
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Review of Jesus Vs. Santa  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this Leslie! It so sets the tone of Christmas Mythology verses our Creator. Of course there is no comparison. But I do like it, how you have had the two entities having there conversation. I so wish more people would question the fact that Christmas and Christ our savior have no real connection since Christ wasn't even born on December 25. Well, that is another topic.

Blessings,
Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Great idea, your daily garden walk. I love plants as well but would never think of getting a snip off someone's plant. Over all, cute premise for a story. I didn't see any errors and it seems balanced in thought. Nice job.

Seabreeze
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Review of Contest Entries  Open in new Window.
Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Very cute and unique story. I had one area where I did't understand what you meant, see below.

I didn't want to be with him right back

Not sure what....right back means in this context.

Best luck with your contest entry.

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hard to argue with the heart! I like the analogy of what waiting is to a lover. We do, as a society, wait for the plates to move and move and witnessing water weather rocks is another excellent description. Using glacier comparison is powerful as well. It is a short poem but packed with power from a lover who is desperate to be with his love. It has all of the elements of emotional love. I like that it is not a poem that rhymes. Excellent poem.

Seabreeze
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