hi! i thought this piece was really good considering you didn't base it on your own feelings. whenever i write, i always try to write about my own experience and emotions or else everything just seems abstract, and i can't write properly. of course, a lot of people (composers, writers, etc.) - maybe even most - write only based on ideas and not really from their own experience. i don't have any complaints about your poem, i think you captured the emotions really, really well. i just think that writing based on what you actually feel and go through makes the whole thing a lot more meaningful - both to the reader and to the writer. :)
i really like it :) i think mainly because that's how i feel everyday in high school. gah, it really is a dreadful place.
(haha, sorry it wasn't much of a review...)
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