I'm new to the reviewing aspect of this site but I must say I really did like these lyrics. They ring with so much truth and I can say with certainty that I would listen to this song on repeat. I've read it a few times trying to find the melody in my head. Only to find that anyway, fast or slow it still has a great impact. The spoken portion is a perfect end to a great set of lyrics. Great job!
I really liked this little piece. I've always had a soft spot for a bit of hope in writing. This is the first thing I've reviewed but I honestly don't have anything negative to say. You've pulled me right in and kept me until the end. I found you through the read a newbie section. I can't wait to see what else you have to tell us.
-SamiJoe
fellow newbie
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