Oh my goodness... This goes for the heart. I can clearly see the love you write about; I can feel the pain of the loss, too. Just thinking of losing something so very precious... It tears me up. This is simply beautiful. Nobody could have written it better.
Please, keep writing.
Even when this is such a small poem, I can actually feel the emotion in every word. I'm guessing... Abusive relationship?
To express something so powerful as this with only ten lines is very impressive. Hats off to you, my friend. This is... Amazing. Just blew my mind.
Keep writing! You have talent.
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