My Dearest Saniya! Your poem is excellent! It has everything that a "suspense" story has with that one extra thing too.... which is the "flowiness" and rhymes of a poem! I was gripped throughout, in fact,while I was reading I actually had beads of sweat on my forehead and I just HAD to read it outloud with a dramatic tone to it. The way you write invites a reader to do that, which is quite fun! I hope you keep writing and I hope I get to buy a personally autographed book of yours someday! :)
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